So here is an excerpt from the second part of my paper. In paragraph 1 I am evaluating the primary text from Act I Scene i in King Lear. In Paragraph 2 I am looking at Scene ii. Please note that I have yet to go back and add citations.
In King Lear, legitimacy is not merely a matter of political opinion and legal
proceedure but of defining individual worth and character. The play
opens with a dialogue between the Earls of Gloucester and Kent as
Gloucester introduces his illegitimate son Edmund to Kent. Of Edmund,
Gloucester says, “I have so often blushed to acknowledge him, that
now I am brazed to it.” Kent replies, “I cannot conceive you,”
and .Gloucester jests, “Sir, this young fellow's mother could.”
Gloucester turns Kent's use of the term “conceive” into wordplay.
While Kent means to say he cannot conceive or understand how
Gloucester has grown bold about an illegitimate son he used to be
ashamed of, Gloucester says that Edmund's mother, with whom he had
illicit intercourse, was bold enough to conceive a child from their
union. Gloucester adds, “this knave
came something saucily into the world before he was sent for, yet was
his mother fair; there was good sport at his making,”. The term “saucily” means
“impudent or flippant” or sexually suggestive. Gloucester says he
enjoyed his brief affair with Edmund's mother, but it was her fault
for getting pregnant and that Edmund was an unwelcome surprise. Kent
remarks, “I cannot wish the fault undone, the issue of it being so
proper.” As Edmund hovers politely in the background, Kent thinks
it is a pity that Edmund is illegitimate, as though if Edmund were
legitimate he would be entitled to Kent's complete rather than
partial regard. To Kent and Gloucester, Edmund's illegitimacy
devalues his worth as a person.
Although he does not say much
in the first scene, it becomes clear in scene ii of King Lear
that Edmund knows exactly what his father and Kent think of him. He
questions why society should devalue him. He says of himself, “my
dimensions are as well compact,/ My mind as generous, and my shape as
true,/ As honest madam's issue.” However, other people refuse to
acknowledge that because of his birth. “Why brand they us /With
base? with baseness? bastardy? base, base?” In these last two lines
quoted here, Edmund repeats the words “base” over and over, the
context being that because he was produced from the “base” or
improper union of his father with a woman he was not married to,
Edmund himself is “base” or immoral. Edmund's repetition of the
word “base” shows how much he is concerned about his self-worth,
because other people do not agree that he is as good “As honest
madam's issue.” His motive for his behavior towards his father and
legitimate half-brother, then, is to make them and the other
characters see that he is just as good and reaffirm how he defines
himself. To Edgar, legitimacy is only a label.
Nice explication, Lizy! I'm excited to see how it plays into your argument as a whole.
ReplyDeleteLizy, I think this is a great start to an explication. I think, though, that it might be good to focus more on bringing out points that aren't as obvious from the text. For instance, it's pretty easy to pick up from the text that Gloucester is punning on "conceived" and so on, but I really like when you say things like "To Edgar, legitimacy is only a label." I would try switching the proportions of straight explanation (basic meaning of the words) and your own interpretation (how we are supposed to read them).
ReplyDeleteLizy, well done! Just some things to think about: is it important that Edmund lives up to his illegitimate label? if Edmund had chosen to act differently (say with compassion instead of revenge), would that have had an effect on his illegitimate label?
ReplyDeleteI think you have done a great job here! Now would be a good time to tie in the "so what" and tie everything firmly back to your thesis!
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