Your advice to me in class this morning was SO helpful. I think it needed to be cut. Here is an edited version of the first part of my paper.
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Part
I: An Echo of the Tudors
Scholars, writers, and ordinary people alike have always been
fascinated by the tumultuous events of the Tudor dynasty. “From
Shakespeare’s day to today, we have been obsessed with the Tudor
period: the colourful lives of the monarchs, the complex rises and
falls of both the servants of the crown and the nobility, the fact
that ordinary people could make their way into the highest offices of
the kingdom” (Morris). We are fascinated, perhaps, by the idea that
the people who lived during those times have something to say to us,
particularly the renowned playwright William Shakespeare who lived
during the closing years of the reign of Elizabeth I, the last of the
Tudors, and during the first years of the reign of her successor
James I, and received the patronage of both. Those who observe the
historical record closely understand that much of the turmoil during
the reign of Elizabeth's father, Henry VIII, and the strained family
relations of his children have to do with Henry's quest for a
legitimate heir. Consequently, his daughters Elizabeth and Mary both
struggled to obtain legitimacy in one way or another during their
lifetimes in order to secure their claims to the throne. The search
for personal legitimacy was the driving force behind the lives of the
Tudor monarchs. Shakespeare's
plays contain echoes of the traumatic events and chaotic
personalities of the Tudor dynasty that suggest that he is recreating
the tragic world of the Tudors
in his plays to address
how the issue of legitimacy affected them. For
this paper, I will consider the plays Richard
III, King Lear, and
King John,
as they are thematically the most relevant to the issue of legitimacy
in Tudor times.
Shakespeare's
play Richard
III is traditionally
considered heavily embedded with Tudor propaganda, as it is depiction
of the fall of the House of York as it lead to the rise of the Tudor
dynasty. However, it is also a thematic treatise on the legitimacy of
the Tudors themselves. In his paper “Shakespeare's King
Richard III and the
Problematics of Tudor Bastardy” Maurice Hunt claims that it is also
an open discussion of the questions of legitimacy surrounding Henry
VIII's heirs, revealing“the emergence of a paradigm of
illegitimate legitimacy (or legitimate illegitimacy), a composite
reproduced in the discourse on royal bastardy in King Richard
III.” Richard III meets my criteria for analysis because
it depicts the overturn of true legitimacy by an usurper because of
how he smears the legitimacy of others, and how this overturn is
reversed.
The
play King John is considered an anomaly among Shakespeare's
history plays, but it has a very frightening similarity to the Tudors
in that it depicts the struggle for the English throne between
members of a single family. Scholar Robert Lane points out that
“Indeed, it is more than plausible that Shakespeare chose King
John's reign because its legitimacy--the fundamental focus of the
play--turned on strikingly similar issues (Lane). During the Tudor
dynasty as in times before as depicted by Shakespeare, the throne of
England was a highly coveted prize, but whoever wanted to claim it
had to prove they had more legitimate credentials—such as birth and
religious creed—than their oppnents. However, most of the
contenders in both instances are very closely related. One would
think that since these people are so closely related they would treat
each other with love, but the desire for power has overpowered all of
these affections. Shakespeare's depiction of this medieval royal
family applies to the Tudors in that the struggle for monarchy and
the legitimacy to secure it is a matter of life and death as well as
war and peace.
While both of these plays have
been demonstrated by Hunt and Lane to be thematically relevant, King
Lear also includes a thematic
discourse on issues of division within a royal family as well
as on legitimacy itself. It is the subplot of the Earl of Glouchester
and the division between his sons which merits critical attention
because of how the illegitimate Edmund questions and changes his own
legitimacy. There are parallels to the Tudor family in King Lear
such that legitimacy is a label applied by others, individuals of
questionable seek to change in themselves and others, and that false
legitimacy is self-destructive while true legitimacy has nothing to
do with birth. The struggle for legitimacy in Shakespeare's plays,
therefore, is Shakespeare's commentary on how the monarchs of his day
struggled with theirs.
Lizy! Good work! This paper was really well organized in that the introduction proposed three main plays you were going to use to support your thesis and then you gave us a brief paragraph on what you're planning on doing with each play - which I'm assuming you're planning on building on/elaborating on later on in this process. I also loved your support and the incorporation of quotes. Some small criticisms: In the closing sentence of your intro you start "For this paper..." I'd suggest finding some different wording so you don't have to actually refer to your own paper - it just makes it sound a little simplistic to say "I'm going to talk about 1,2,3 in my paper" though maybe that's just my opinion. Also, I wasn't a huge fan of the opening "scholars, writer, and ordinary people..." I get what you were trying to say I just couldn't help thinking "I guess writers aren't ordinary people then... well they are pretty strange..." haha.
ReplyDeleteAnyways, those are just really small things and you can decide what you think about them. Good work Lizy!
Lizy,
ReplyDeleteGreat organization! I think you're off to a really great start! I agree with Mikaela's suggestions. Also, the last sentence is a bit confusing for me. Try to rearrange and clear it up a bit. I thought you were going to add some background about the Tudors. I don't necessarily think you need (everything seems pretty well explained), but I just remember talking about it and was wondering what you had decided to do. :) Good work!