I'll be posting a list of potential venues today, but I wanted to put up more of the draft I've been working on and see what you think!
Thesis: When
asked what genre is most true to life, most people would answer tragedies. We
have a tendency as a society to believe that the worst is going to happen, and
hoping anything positive will is wishful thinking. Romances, however, are a mix
of tragedy and comedy, and while Shakespeare's romance The Winter's Tale has
been criticized since its beginning as being unrealistic, Leontes' experience
with the oracle within the play becomes a metaphor for the audience's rejection
of The Winter's Tale, seemingly based on a desire to be realistic, but in
reality predicated on an inability to see recognize the romantic elements of
life.
You can read the first two paragraphs here.
Next moves in my argument:
1. The
Oracle as a Metaphor for Romance
2.1.1
Supernatural Elements of the Oracle
Because of both the nature of the
oracle and how his words are received, the oracle serves as a metaphor for the
genre of romance, specifically its supernatural elements and mixture of
genres. This assumed supernatural
interference in people’s lives is evident as Leontes expects to hear the truth from
the oracle because he or she is “the mouthpiece of the gods.” In ancient Greece or Rome, an oracle was a
priest or priestess “through which the gods were supposed to speak or prophesy”
(OED). Leontes is reassured that his
comrades who have gone to the temple of Apollo will “bring all” “from the
oracle” (Act 2, scene 1, l.185-6). The
synecdoche apparent in Leontes’ words—“all” to mean truth—reveals his trust in
this supernatural power. The oracle is
capable of finding out “all” from the gods, meaning the gods are an integral
part of these Sicilians’ lives, just as supernatural elements are an integral
part of romances. Romance has “the
character or quality that makes something appeal strongly to the imagination .
. . an air, feeling, or sense of wonder [or] mystery” (OED). This sense of wonder comes from an other-worldliness,
a connection with the world of the gods.
As Dr. Young, professor of English at Brigham Young University,
explains, “Both the coincidences and the supernatural are expressions of an
overarching power—the gods, the powers—that acts through time, through nature,
to accomplish ends that humans don’t entirely understand.” The gods are intimately involved in the lives
of the characters who depend on the oracles to learn the truths the gods already
know.
2.1.2 Not Picky about Genres
Romances, or “tragicomedies,” combine
the literary genres of tragedy and comedy.
Shakespeare’s romances involve separation and wandering, characteristic
of tragedies, but end in reunion and reconciliation, like the ending of a
comedy (Wells, A Dictionary of
Shakespeare). Leontes’ main flaw,
his jealousy, is reflective of the main flaw of the heroes in tragedies. King Polixenes personifies Leontes’ weakness:
“This jealousy / Is for a precious creature; as she’s rare / Must it be great;
and, as his person’s mighty, / Must it be violent” (Act 1, scene 2, l.452-5). Suddenly, Leontes’ jealousy is a destructive
animal which Polixenes correctly foretells will lead to great violence. A tragic hero would respond without restraint
to a situation that seems to be black and white (http://www3.dbu.edu/mitchell/comedytr.htm).
The play’s shift from tragedy to comedy
is abrupt and clearly identifiable. The
shepherd repeats at the play’s shift from tragedy to comedy, “Heavy matters,
heavy matters!” (Shakespeare, Act 3, scene 3, l.111). In a repeated phrase, he has summed up the
tragedy of the last three acts. This
shift is complete as he exclaims—in preparation for his own good fortune, and
for Leontes’ eventual happiness—“‘Tis a lucky day . . . and we’ll do good deeds
on ‘t” (Shakespeare, l.137-8, III, iii).
Shakespeare’s decision to end Leontes’ unhappy years with happiness and
marriage is characteristic of comedy, as Dr. Burton points out. “Tragicomedy” suits this mishmash of tragedy
and comedy, not decidedly one or the other.
1.2
Mutually Ignored: Oracles and Romances
It
is because of these supernatural elements and this mishmash of genres that,
like the oracle’s words, The Winter’s
Tale has been met with contempt by critics.
This contemptuous attitude is reflected in Paulina’s words about her
friend’s, Hermione’s, statue coming alive: “That she is living, / Were it but
told you, should be hooted at / Like an old tale; but it appears she lives”
(Shakespeare, l.115-117, V, iii).
Paulina’s choice of the word “hooted” accurately describe others’
reactions to the supposed miracle of Hermione’s reawakening. It also reflects the common attitude towards
the plot of The Winter’s Tale. The Oxford English Dictionary defines
“hooting” as “call[ing] or shout[ing scornfully or abusively] at or after
anyone,” which is what critics did during and after Shakespeare’s day. In the 1600s, Ben Jonson expressed his
dissatisfaction with Shakespeare’s apparently loose touch with reality. Jonson considered Shakespeare’s seeming
disregard for accurate “geography, [his] only partly explained sixteen-year
concealment of Hermione, or [his] depiction of Leontes’ unprovoked jealousy” as
the result of laziness and manipulation, not artistic judgment (Wells). Just as Leontes ignored the oracle’s words, critics
ignored Shakespeare’s play because they expected truth, not crudely conceived
entertainment, from a successful playwright.
2. The
Real Reasons for Resistance to Romance
3.1 Dismissing the Happy Ending
The
Winter’s Tale faces unavoidable resistance to being taken seriously because
its romantic elements make it seem not only mish-mashed, but unreal. The play has been dismissed as “grounded on
impossibilities,” just as Leontes dismisses the oracle’s words as having
nothing of truth in them (Dryden). But these
impossibilities are more than Shakespeare’s faulty knowledge of geography; among
these “impossibilities” is the idea that tragedy can end in happiness. Such negative reactions to the play reveal
that, as Dr. Young explains, “[T]he play uncovers and responds to our deep suspicion
of happy endings . . . Both [Leontes’
jealousy] and [our suspicions] are expressions of what might be called ‘fear
fulfillment.’” Leontes cannot believe
that what would make him happiest is true, that his wife really is faithful to
him. In speaking of his own feelings of
jealousy, he muses that “[a]ffection . . . dost make possible things not so
held . . . dost . . . infect . . . my brains” (Act 1, scene 2, l. 138-146). Leontes’ recognition of his own lack of reason
does not stop him from believing his unreasonable suspicions. After her experience of reading The Winter’s Tale in class, a student of
Dr. Young’s wrote: “I like happy endings even though our class seemed to think
that happy endings are unrealistic. . . . I guess that many times the ‘Happy
Ending’ we’re looking for doesn’t always come.”
fabulous. Fabulous Rachel. small note - there's a sentence in your thesis where you say "...predicated on an inability to see recognize the romantic elements.."... you might want to get rid of the "see" haha. I've been talking to a lot of people about this play too and a lot told me that they loved because of it's magical, unreal element - that's something you could form into a counterargument that you refute or could just be something to keep in mind while writing
ReplyDeleteoh and I forgot to say - make sure your paragraphs fit together and there's a natural flow from one idea to the next
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