Progress Report

Hey there everyone. 

I just figured that I would post about what things I took away from my meeting with Professor Burton:

I'll add more onto this later...I wrote most of what we talked about down, but I don't have the paper in front of me. 

Things to improve

• More blatant transitions in my sections (rather that being lazy with JUST a section header. Not that section headers are bad).
• Introduce some general teaching standards that schools have for teaching Shakespeare in my opening. This will make my paper more publishable.
• Talk about how I came up with the criteria for a successful performance.
• Don't assume that the people reading my paper have seen the performance--describe the atmosphere created more in depth. Put this under the "audience involvement" section. 
•  Script cutting comparisons
• Pros and cons
• sometimes vital things are cut out for the sake of time, attention span, and clarity.
• Find a publication venue...
• look through past student's posts of similar topics and see where they submitted.