Showing posts with label Revised Thesis. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Revised Thesis. Show all posts

Thursday, April 4, 2013

Back to the Beginning

        So I kind of had to rework a few things (well pretty much everything). I met with Dr. Burton on Wednesday and he pointed out that my thesis was too general, and everyone has pretty much analyzed Henry in this way. So naturally, I was quite discouraged. I started from the beginning (again), and scrambled for something that could help me. I began reading a book that I borrowed from Dr. Burton about rhetoric, and it reminded me of another concept we had talked about in another class. 
         In this class, we read Adam Smith's essay on sympathy. Smith's main premise was that sympathy wasn't necessarily a purely altruistic function, but that it was necessary for humanity to function. Smith says, "How selfish man may be supposed, there are evidently some principles in his nature, which interest him in the fortune of others, and render their happiness necessary to him." He asserts that the "greatest ruffian" can even feel sympathy. Essentially, we can never truly feel what another person feels, but when we see someone in pain, we naturally imagine ourselves in the same situation and how we would feel.
         Smith later applies this to capitalism and how it functions, but the part that was most interesting to me is how it can be applied to Henry. Henry no doubt has a powerful rhetoric, but instead of thinking of his rhetoric as the end result perhaps his speaking ability stems from the fact that he can sympathize better than other individuals. His ability to sympathize gives him the power to sway people rhetorically. I think this solves my problem of wanting to present Henry as both bad and good because as Smith defines sympathy, everybody is able to practice it, so therefore, Henry can have both characteristics.
         Any feedback is seriously appreciated. Thanks for your patience everyone! 

Thursday, March 28, 2013

Paper Progress

Okay, so this really doesn't have to do with my paper
but this is a picture of the Bell X-1, which was the first
manned plane to break the sound barrier! Pretty cool!
Creative Commons: dctim1
Okay, so I think I need to streamline my thesis a little bit, but with the positive feedback I got on my current thesis from you guys, I decided to forge ahead with a rewrite of my paper!  I think I can use a lot of my points and research from the previous draft, but this paper hopefully feels like it has more of a direction to it and a unity in the argument. I hope you enjoy!

Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Let me know what you think!

Okay, I'm formulating a better thesis than my rough draft one, still going off the research that I have, but including this idea of the oracle. This is probably too long to be considered my finalized thesis, but I wanted your thoughts and suggestions before I dive into my paper again. I hope this one has more direction than my previous draft and can appeal to a more specific audience (although I'm not totally decided on what that audience is yet).

When asked what genre is most true to life, most people would answer tragedies. We have a tendency as a society to believe that the worst is going to happen, and hoping anything positive will is wishful thinking. Romances, however, are a mix of tragedy and comedy, and while Shakespeare's romance The Winter's Tale has been criticized since its beginning as being unrealistic, Leontes' experience with the oracle within the play becomes a metaphor for the audience's rejection of The Winter's Tale, seemingly based on a desire to be realistic, but in reality predicated on an inability to see recognize the romantic elements of life.  

Thursday, March 21, 2013

"It's a Dangerous Business": A Rough Draft

. . .writing a rough draft.  "You step onto the road . . .
[and] there's no knowing where you might be swept off to."
Creative Commons "Path to the Tree" from Arbron
I think I have a pretty extensive, thorough outline for my paper, although there are some paragraphs that might become unnecessary and others that I'll need to add in when I finally concretize my thesis.  My introduction needs some work, as right now it is just my thesis.

I have sources and quotes for most of my paragraphs, but beyond my draft I don't have written paragraphs.  I also need to add in to my outline more evidence and more quotes from the primary text, but I'm feeling optimistic about my thesis.

This is the rough draft of the paper below.  I hope that you enjoy it!

Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Announcements and Changes

So I got a hold of my friend who is in the production of The Winter's Tale that's going to be tomorrow. It will be in the Nelke theater in the HFAC (where we saw Henry V). The showtimes are 1pm, 2pm, and 4pm and admission is free.
Also, this Saturday the Quill and Sword Medieval (and Renaissance?we're actually debating that part) Reenactment club will be hosting its annual Corpus Christi festival. It will be at 6:30 PM in the step-down lounge of the Clyde Building. There will be games, food, and entertainment, including a medieval play that I am directing, The Creation and Fall of Man. We are celebrating culture in the times before and during Shakespeare's life, and so you might find it a good way to discover the setting of the plays we're reading or simply a weekend getaway.

Anyway, that's all the announcements I wanted to share. In the meantime, after much deliberation, I have boiled down my ideas about the Tudors into...

MY NEW THESIS AND PAPER OUTLINE!!!!!!!!!

Shakespeare recreates the trauma of the Tudor dynasty in his plays to demonstrate that it is not illegitimacy that corrupts a person's character but ambition, and that legitimacy does not make a person good but virtue.
  • Shakespeare's plays contain echoes of the traumatic events and chaotic personalities of the Tudor dynasty that suggest that Shakespeare is recreating the tragic events of the dynasty in his plays to address how the issue of legitimacy has affected his patrons. 
  • In both Shakespeare's plays and the Tudor dynasty, legitimacy is not merely a label associated with birth but a stigma assigned by others. 
  • Shakespeare characters who reject their illegitimacy and seek to overcome it are driven by their ambition to betray family ties in order to steal their legitimacy in much the same way members of the Tudor family did the same.
  • The ambition shown by Shakespeare's characters is self-destructive because it was often the case in real life.
  • It is not literal legitimacy that is the foundation of a person's character but moral legitimacy or virtue.
  • Conclusion: not only a message to the monarchs and their power-hungry courtiers but also a message to the audience that illegitimacy is just a label and that virtue is more rewarding than revenge
    • So what: The monarchy's battle for legitimacy was also the battle for the soul and the stability of a nation, the battle for individual legitimacy is a microcosm, but it can be seen the other way around

      The plays I will be using are The Winter's Tale, Henry VIII, Richard III, King Lear, and King John. 

Wednesday, October 31, 2012

LLL Annotated Bibliography


Revised Thesis: 

The inconsistencies are in Love’s Labour’s Lost, such as the divergent ending, can be explained because the play is an original story by Shakespeare and not a retelling of a familiar story. I want to prove that Shakespeare ended this play without a happy ending to reflect of the history of the times, write for a specific audience, and a show some originality in his first story he created.

Bibliography:

Social Graph:

  • Roommates-Vary from English to Psycology to nursing, so I will get all degrees on the scale from familiar to completely lost
  • Family-We all went and saw Hamlet together so they are all familiar with Shakespeare though not with this play. Still they are up-to-date on media and pop culture so they will have good insights
  • Professors-I am taking the Tudor Sonnets class from Kim Johnson. I could probably ask her for direction and obtain social proof
  • Classmates-With the blog going not I feel better knowing I can post if I get lost and need help.
New Media:

Social Networks:

  • Facebook, though a large portion of my friends don’t speak English
  • Any other groups I stumble across in my research
Traditional Scholarly Sources