Case of the Mondays

The top commenter would not agree with my thesis.
I find this response from a lot of commenters on reality TV articles.
Luckily the guy blow has my back.
(I took this screen schot)

Monday I managed to sit down and spend the class time figuring out which moves I wanted to make in paper. My main question is if the order in which I will discuss my topic makes logical sense. Should I rearrange anything, add in explanations, take out unnecessary ones, etc.? I have a hard time telling whether or not my logic makes sense to others, so it's really helpful when I have a few people read over a short outline of my paper before I begin (and English majors/Shakespearian scholars (that's you!) usually give better feedback than my mother).